Thursday, October 14, 2010

Beneatha's Journal

Well, my dreams of becoming a doctor are now gone...that stupid Walter had no clue what he was using the money for. All he wanted was a liquor store, and now, everything is ruined. His friend Willy ran away with the money. Oh, how come I couldn't think of that? Of course he would have token the money away, why would he help us? Now we are all hopeless, I am hopeless. I think that our family is going to fall apart. I can't believe Walter did this, I don't think I will ever forgive him in my entire life. My life is ruined, and Mama's heart is broken. All that money, gone, given to some man who ran away. The only chance that I have now is to pray, pray to God that the good times will come again, that Willy can go to hell for taking our money...
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4 comments:

  1. Innae KimOctober 14, 2010 at 7:05 PM

    I really like the way you listed beneatha's wants. And especially the part where it says to pray to God, and telling Walter to go to hell.
    That is very mean, but i guess that's how beneatha feels right now

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  2. SabrinaOctober 14, 2010 at 8:58 PM

    I like how you expressed Beneatha's feelings. What you wrote sounded exactly how she felt. You expressed what she thoughteally well.

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  3. J1Sesaldo2October 14, 2010 at 9:02 PM

    i like how you really expressed beneatha's feelings with detail and the part where the only chance to is pray to god.

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  4. AnonymousOctober 14, 2010 at 9:32 PM

    The last sentence is so deep and i really love it. Considering that he didnt only use it, bur what he used it for didbt even workout so thats what he gets for being sly and selfish

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